Your explanations are quite detailed here, Eloise and the third explanation is definitely the best. It would be a good idea to try to vary the comments - for example by telling us something different about each masthead design or font choice or colour rather than repeating that it tells us the name of the magazine. For the third magazine you find more distinctive features of the magazine to explain.
Your explanations are quite detailed here, Eloise and the third explanation is definitely the best. It would be a good idea to try to vary the comments - for example by telling us something different about each masthead design or font choice or colour rather than repeating that it tells us the name of the magazine. For the third magazine you find more distinctive features of the magazine to explain.
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